Proposal for location in England (Correction)

The purpose of this proposal is to give some information about the facilities to have a location in England instead of United State of America.

The aim of our company is to expand our products around the European Union to attract foreig clients because we will have a greater recognition at European level.

Although we are clearly more close to United State of America than to England, this last country has a dynamic and exciting lifestyle with many cultural events that will attract foreig people to come, so people will, at least, hear about us. Addition, if we place ourselves in England we would save the import and export rates, apart from tariffs. That is because England is in the European Union. Furthermore, travel to england is more economical than travel to USA and is more affordable to the people and they do not have change the money to euros if they live in european countries.

About United State of America, everybody knows that United State of America is the first country in the majority of all aspects, but they aren´t in the European Union so our rates of import and export will considely increase. In addition, this country is more far away than England and to the most people would not like to spend much time stuck on a plane.

However, in my opinion, I think that we should get the location in England instead of United State of America for all the benefits we would get to be directly within the European union when we are going to get an import and an export and it is more affordable to the people although both countries are expensive.

Letter to a franchise (Correction)

Dear Sirs,

My name is Dan Dan, I am a 26-years-old and I have been working in a national company like a accountant since I graduated from the college of Ofxford, London. I specialize in accounting, so I have idea about those themes.

I am interested in the purchase of your franchise because I like the way your others franchises works and the products and services your company provides and I like all the products that your company creates because I think that they are very usefull for the people and I would like to have the opportunity to help the people to improve their lifestyle after they prove the products. But first I wonder if:

Would you could offer me information to start the business, training and brand recognition?
Would you dial dictate fees for services, the type of services or products that I can offer?
Would you hire workers or I have to hire workers?
Would you give me the descriptions of each job and a guide on wages to offer?
Would I have to hiring machinery in a specific company or I can choose the company to buy the machinery?
What is the amount required in the initial investment and what percentage of revenue should I give?
There are fees to be paid for the advertising? How much would be the cost?
Can I choose the localitation for the franchise or you choose where I must open the franchise?

Thanks for your attention,
Yours faithfully
Dan Dan Wang Cheng

Proposal for location in England

The purpose of this proposal is to give some information about the facilities to have a location in England instead of USA.

The aim of our company is to expand our products around the European Union to attract foreig clients because we will have a greater recognition at European level.

Although we are clearly more close to USA than to England, this last country has a dynamic and exciting lifestyle with many cultural events that will attract foreig people to come, so people will, at least, hear about us. Addition, if we place ourselves in England we would save the import and export rates, apart from tariffs. That is because England is in the European Union.
About USA, everybody knows that USA is the first country in the majority of all aspects, but they aren´t in the European Union so our rates of import and export will considely increase.

However, in my opinion, I think that we should get the location in England instead of USA for all the benefits we would get to be directly within the European union when we are going to get an import and an export.

Letter to a franchise

Dear Sirs,

My name is Dan Dan, I am a 26-years-old and I have been working in a national company like a accountant since I graduated from the college of Ofxford, London.

I am interested in the purchase of your franchise because I like the way your others franchises works and the products and services your company provides. But first I wonder if:
Would you could offer me information to start the business, training and brand recognition?
Would you dial dictate fees for services, the type of services or products that I can offer?
Would you hire workers or I have to hire workers?
Would you give me the descriptions of each job and a guide on wages to offer?
Would I have to hiring machinery in a specific company or I can choose the company to buy the machinery?
What is the amount required in the initial investment and what percentage of revenue should I give?
There are fees to be paid for the advertising? How much would be the cost?
Can I choose the localitation for the franchise or you choose where I must open the franchise?

Thanks for your attention,
Yours faithfully
Dan Dan Wang Cheng